[Pratikshya comment, 29 July 2024- this one was originally titled 'Despondent Soul' which I later changed to Untitled to make it sound less melancholy.]
With a weary smile
and nowhere to run
You hide until the
sun is gone
Whispers and prayers
and invites for the sleep
For you are real, never, but in your dreams
And colors of life
And colors of bliss
Before long, they
stay for a while
For
with the first light, begins your night
Then cover your soul
and disappear in vain
Perhaps the sun will
go down again
You hide until the sun is gone
Whispers and prayers and invites for the sleep
For you are real, never, but in your dreams
And colors of life
And colors of bliss
Before long, they stay for a while
For with the first light, begins your night
Then cover your soul and disappear in vain
Perhaps the sun will go down again
"Perhaps the sun, will go down again " I liked the way you brought about the climax ... amazing writing buddy !!!
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Deletegreat poem, Pratikshya!! nice ending with the "...sun will go down again"
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Deletethts beautiful................... \m/
ReplyDeleteThank you Prabhash :)
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